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APostingGod
12-04-2011, 04:23 AM
Redemption opens with Billy Flamer waiting by the backstage entrance of the Target Center for interviews. Most wrestlers push past him, but he spots Scorch making his way in and stops him.


Billy Flamer: Scorch! Care to answer a few questions?

Scorch: Yeah, I have to focus - now get out of my way.

Billy Flamer: Quickly then- how does it feel to be in the biggest match of the night as EWE hosts its' first Redempt-


Billy cuts short when he hears a THWACK, and Scorch's falls to the ground holding his ankle. A woman figure, dressed in all black with a mask covering her face and holding a club, doesn't stick around for questions from Billy and immediately flees the scene.


Billy Flamer: Hey! Come back! Uh, someone get the paramedics!






Scott: Hello, Scott and Max here for EWE's Redemption V!

Max: I think you mean "Max and Scott".

Scott: Sure don't Max. Anyways folks welcome to Redemption V, the biggest PPV in our history. We have a wonderful show her for you tonight. Not only is every title on the line but we have JMC vs. The Judge, and The One having his retirement match in the PPV he helped make famous. Let's not forget our new owner will be here tonight, and from what we have been hearing, the landscape is about to change.

Max: But what about that World Title match? If Scorch can't compete, we might be heading towards the biggest Redemption let down in history.

Scott: Don't worry folks, I'm sure someone will be willing to step up if Scorch can go.

Max: But what about the rest of the show?

Scott: We've got so many matches tonight we might be here for a long while! We're starting off with a Tag Team Number One Contender Spot match between the Bees and Anarchy!

Max: Then we have what's turned into a bitter rivalry as Murphy and Mike Adams go head to head in a last man standing match, and the Ironman Championship makes its' return between Anarchy brothers Beno and The Saviour Jacob Senn!

Scott: And so much more, but let's jump into it! Our opening match is that tag team match!



The Bees vs. Anarchy (Lyara Jayde Storm & Captain Teatley)
Tag Team Championship Number 1 Contender



Scott: You know, Max, the winner of this match will get to face the Tag Team Champions at EWE Cold War.

Max: Who are the current champions again?

Scott: That would be our GM of America Jesse Long and The One.

Max: I thought the One was retiring tonight?

Mina: This match is for the Number One Contender for the Tag Team Championship! Introducing first from Brooklyn, New York and weighing in at too big and too beautiful, the team of Connie and Tina- the Bees!

Flight of the Bumblebee starts playing and the Bees come out at the top of the ramp, clad in their Bees outfits. The girls grasp hands and wave to the crowd, who give them cheers. They make their way down the ramp, bouncing all the way into the ring.

Scott: The Bees have been on fire with a win streak that doesn’t end, no matter who is put in front of them.

Max: I don’t know if their training has actually paid off or if their competition is just not taking them seriously.

Scott: Either way they’ve made it this far, let’s see if they can get another win here tonight.

Mina: Their opponents, weighing at a combined 334 lbs and representing Anarchy! Introducing Lyara Jayde Storm and Captain Teatly!

“My Chick Bad” hits the hits the PA, the people in charge making the family-friendly song choice. Lyara angrily strides out ahead of Teatly, who does his best to make it seem like they’re a unified team as he tries to keep up with her.

Max: Wow, Lyara sure looks pissed off.

Scott: Indeed, she wasn’t too pleased with how her fellows of Anarchy Beno and Jacob spoke about her this week.

Max: Or how Beno hospitalized her weeks before. If they were a couple does that make it spousal abuse?

Scott: Let’s just not go there Max.

Anarchy have made their way down and Lyara wastes no time with posing as she gets in the ring, ready to start. The Bees look her over and talk amongst themselves before Tina steps in the ring.

DING DING

Lyara rushes Tina, but Tina was ready and hits Lyara with a clothesline. Lyara hits the mat hard, a little stunned by the stability of the Bee. Tina claps her hands together and looks back to Connie, but her celebration is short lives as she falls due to a leg sweep from a recovering Lyara. Tina tries to cover herself up while Lyara starts with kicks to her body.

Max: Tina needs to get her head in the game!

Scott: Lyara is a woman scorned and said she’s looking to take it out on anyone in her path, starting tonight.

Max: She still looks hot when she’s angry. Maybe hotter.

Tina kicks Lyara off of her and manages to get to her feet. Lyara rushes Tina again, but Tina catches her again and irish whips her into the corner. Lyara catches herself before she hits the turnbuckle but the follow up from the massive woman’s body slamming into her and finishes the job with a stinkface. Lyara falls to the ground out of breath, and Tina picks her up for an easy scoop slam.

1- kickout!

Lyara isn’t getting up though, and Tina goes to climb the ropes.

Max: Uh oh! Incoming!

Tina makes her way to the top rope and goes for the splash, but Lyara dodges and the ring shakes from the resounding empty thud. Lyara seizes the moment and quickly makes her way up the ropes and waits for Tina to recover, and Lyara lets out a scream as she hits Tina with a missile dropkick! Tina hits the ground.

Scott: Lyara with her own from the top rope!

Lyara goes for the cover.

1…

2....

Nope!

Max: The Lone Storm could win this one herself. Who needs those other guys anyway?

Scott: Oh don’t count the Bees out yet Max. They work best together and given the chance they can turn the tide of the match!

Max: If they’re both in the pool any movement will turn the tide.

Storm gets up and starts kicking Tina a few times before running about the ring, but as she passes Teatly he reaches out and tags in. She shoots him an angry look and starts arguing with him, but the referee calls the tag and Teatly makes his way in the ring. As Lyara protests with the ref, Tina has gotten back up and heads to tag Connie in. Teatly sees this and makes a move to head her off, but as he approaches she nails him in his teabags! She waggles her breasts at Teatly mockingly, and the ref turns just in time to see her tag Connie in.

Scott: While the Bees don’t normally result to cheap measures, Teatly probably had that one coming when he questioned their popularity in their “other” careers.

Max: You mean their work with John Ster’s campaign?

Scott: Not exactly, Max.

Connie steps in the ring and begins stomping on the vulnerable Teatly, but taking a note from Lyara he lifts his legs and kicks one of her knees out. She falls and grabs her leg. Teatly gets up with help from the ropes, runs at Connie and connects with a shining wizard! Teatly tries to get the crowd and Lyara to cheer for him. Lyara puts her hand up and turns her head away.

Scott: Teatly may not care for Anarchy anymore but shows here that he still wants a chance at those titles with Lyara.

Max: Even if she wants nothing to do with him!

Teatly shrugs and turns back to his match only to be met with a surprise knee to the gut from Connie. While he’s doubled over she grabs his head and executes a pedigree! He’s down, and Connie climbs the rope for her own Incoming!

Scott: Beautiful body splash from Connie!

Max: If that’s what you want to call it…

Connie rolls Teatly over and lays on top of him.

1…..

2…..

3!!

Mina: Your winners and Tag Team Number One Contenders, The Bees!

Connie gets up and waddles as fast as she can to Tina, and the two smother each other with hugs and celebrate their win. Lyara, shocked at the upset, yells something about “useless partner” and storms out of the ring, leaving Teatly to recover on his own.

Scott: There you have it folks! The Bees are on their way to a shot at tag team gold!

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The feed cuts to the General Manager of America's office in the back.


Jesse: What a show so far! I haven't been paying attention to it, but Siri tells me that the everything has been great and that everything has changed. Also that temperature in Colombo, Sri Lanka is a brisk 79 degrees.

Now you may be asking yourself, "Self, why isn't the most powerful and handsome and well endowed authority figure in EWE paying attention to its biggest show of the year?" The answer is simple, I have bigger fish to fry. Or perhaps I should say, "pescados más grandes a freír". For those of you unaware, at the event after Redemption, my little pet project that I've been working on for the past year and a half will finally come to fruition. Call it an early Christmas present from your favorite GM, because EWE's is going South of the Border! Live from Mexico City, EWE is throwing out the familiar in favor of some madness enmascarada and two extra sides. Every EWE Superstar involved will be required to compete under special gimmicks in over the top matches, all of which will be by my design. While there are still a few "t's" that need crossing and lower case "j's" that need dotting, right now I can announce the two co-main events!

In our first main event, one of EWE's deepest rivalries will be injected with some lucha libre mojo. There's no love lost between The Judge and JMC, but the question begs to be asked, what would the suave and sophisticated Paolo Arturo Vincenté and the rough and tumble Jim Cassius do to each other when forced to share the square circle? We'll find out at South of the Border because it's going to be "El Wrestler You Wish Your Wrestler Could Smell Like" versus "El Croc Tamer", and just to make sure that they can't get away from each other no matter what, I'm making it a Mexican Toro Rope Match! Paolo and Jim will be tied together at the wrist by a five foot bull rope, and the only way to win will be to drag your opponent to all six corners in succession. To reiterate, I said "the only way to win", so whatever steps Paolo and Jim need to take to ensure victory, they are more than welcome to take them. Hell, if they DON'T beat the ever living shit out of each other, I'll be supremely disappointed.

What's sure not to disappoint though is South of the Border's second main event. You see, I'm all about opportunity, and what better opportunity would there be than for me to take a relative unknown here in EWE and put him up against the biggest dog in the yard? That's why, live from Mexico City, the EWE Champion, for now at least, Sal Karver will don the masked persona of the lightning fast and twice and violent Kosher Dragon will defend his honor against the up and coming Native American Luchador Eluno Esperanza! This won't be any old lucha match though, in a first of its kind encounter that I am calling "¡Extremo Deshonra!" For those of you without Rosetta Stone, that's "extreme dishonor", and trust me when I tell you, this match is taking both of those words very literally. In order to win the match, you must first make your opponent suffer the ultimate dishonor a luchador can face, and that's losing their mask. Upon unmasking, the dishonored luchador must be pinned or made to submit, no DQ, no count out, no rope breaks, falls count anywhere, weapons greatly encouraged. Will Eluno skyrocket his place into the EWE record books? Or will Kosher Dragon feel the shame of being unmasked and defeated by the Native American newcomer? Well hell I don't know, I don't book the finishes!

That's what's in EWE's future, though. Let's focus on the present, let's get back to the ring, IT'S REDEMPTION BITCHES!


Cut back to ringside where the announcers are both shocked and intrigued with the GM's announcement.

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Scott: Folks no update on Scorch as of yet, but he is seeking medical attention as we speak. However we do have the EWE Champion Salvador Karver backstage with Billy Flamer.

Flamer: Champ, what are your thoughts on what happened earlier with that cowardly act to Scorch?

Sal: I'm not happy about. Last year I enter Redemption with momentum and the fans on my side, and I blew it. Now, for the second straight year I have a chance to really show people what I'm made of, and the number 1 contender has been attacked and we might not even have a match.

???: Oh don't worry about that Salvador.


D. Hero walks into the interview.


D. Hero: If the Scorch can't go, D. Hero will be more than happy to cash in his title shot and deliver a performance for the ages. Because really, we all know the fans want to see a real Champion. Not a choke artist.



Sal: Maybe I'll let you join Scorch on that medic table?


Both men stare each other down as we switch to the ring.



Mike Adams vs. Murphy
Last Man Standing Match


Max: It's going to be one crazy night, what's next up?

Scott: We’re almost ready for a grudge match over half a decade in the making.

Max: Yes, for those of you not familiar with the early days of Wrestling Evolution, Mike Adams used to be the man. And Dan Murph was just starting out. While since then each man has seen himself become a World Champion, Dan still feels the stigma of superior and subordinate is intact.

Scott: And he will stop at nothing to dispel the notion.

Max: A lot of people think he’s gone too far in his quest for respectability.

Scott: It’s gotten beyond that now, Dan Murph blames everyone else for all that’s ever gone wrong and he wants people to suffer for it.

Max: You got that one right. Mike Adams did not want this fight. It took months of torture and abuse of his friends and family to finally lure him back into the ring for this huge contest.

Mina: The following grudge match is scheduled for one fall. Introducing first from Waterford, Ireland, weighing in at 293 lbs, “The Irrational Irishman” Murphy!!

“Loyal To No One” plays Dan Murph out to the ring alongside an eruption of negative energy. He slowly struts his way up the ramp, fighting back his smirk as he does. He gets into the ring and stretches on the ropes as he awaits his opponent. The crowd begins their “Mike’s Gonna Kill You” chants when the beginning of “Let it Roll” sets them off.

Mina: And his opponent…from N…rk Ci…, Wei…ng i…t…2...bs..., Unst…Mi…ms!!

Scott: Listen to this reaction, Max!

Max: The cheers of the crowd just drowned out most of Mina’s introduction of “Unstoppable” Mike Adams!

Mike finally appears on the ramp as the crowd begins to chant “Wel-Come Back!” He doesn’t take the time to soak it in though as he makes a run straight to the ring. Murphy tries to cut him off, but Mike stops just short. When Dan goes to kick him he finds air and Mike grabs his leg and pulls him out of the ring. Mike whips him hard into the steps, as Murphy dents the steel. Mike then tosses Murphy into the ring and gets in with him as the bell rings.

Scott: What a start for Mike Adams.

Max: There goes the question about ring rust.

Scott: I hope for Murphy’s sake those steps weren’t rusty.

Max: I’m not following.

Scott: Infections are bad.

Mike watches Murphy start to get to his feet and jumps on him with a series of rights to the side of the head. Murphy backs himself up into the corner to force the break. The official seems reluctant but still forces Mike back. Murphy thanks him and quickly hits a thumb to the eye much to the dismay of the crowd. He spins Mike around and rubs his face into the turnbuckle, then drags it a few feet along the top ropes.

Scott: There we see the cheap tactics Murphy has embraced over the last few years.

Max: This is a man who had to earn his way to the top and never forgot it.

Scott: It’s one thing to remember your roots, it’s another to martyr yourself over every little thing.

Max: He’s not really martyring himself.

Scott: I guess you’re right. Martyr’s have the decency to **** off.

Max: Whoa! There are children listening.

Scott: Sorry but his selfish childish antics **** me the **** off.

Murphy hits a big suplex on Mike, holding him high and taunting the fans for a bit before just letting go and waiting for the splat. He doesn’t see Mike land on his feet. Mike hits a big Mongolian Chop on the big man. He then hits the ropes and comes back with a big boot as the former WPW Champion is groggy but still on his feet. Mike hits the ropes again for a flying forearm but Murphy catches him with a fall away slam. Mike hits the ropes and falls onto the apron. Dan comes after him and catches a shoulder to the midsection. Sunset flip attempt…

One…

Two…

Murphy rolls it over…

One…

Two…

He starts to stand up and looks to be going for a sit down powerbomb…

He hits it!!

One…

Two…

Three…

!!

Max: I do not believe it.

Scott: But it happened, Max.

Max: This one is over…when Mike Adams says it’s over.

Scott: How he had the presence of mind to get his foot under the ropes is anyone’s guess.

Max: Unstoppable is not just a self professed moniker for Mike Adams.

Murphy is seething as he slaps Mike in the back of the head. He slaps him again as he yells for him to get up. As Mike gets up Dan goes for the Black Death!! He gets his hands clasped but he has to push Mike into the ropes to do it. The official calls for the break and Dan whips Mike into the ropes. Mike ducks a big boot…

Scott: What an impact right there!

Max: That was a devastating Spear by Mike Adams!!

One..

Two…

Three…

No!! Murphy kicks out of the pin attempt. Mike picks him up and steps back a moment to catch his breath. Murphy takes advantage of the lull to turn and shove the official!!

Scott: What the hell is he doing?!

Max: He’s getting himself disqualified is what he’s doing!

The official pulls himself up off the mat and goes to call for the bell when Mike grabs his arms and screams “NOOOOOO!!!” He turns to Dan and shouts “NOW!!!!!!!”

Scott: What does he…hey!!

Max: Chris Cash, Jess Adams what are they doing here?!

Mike’s wife and best friend answer the question as they start to clear off the announce table. Murphy hits a right hand but Mike fires back with one of his own. They repeat this a few times before Mike sends Murphy into the corner. Mike won’t stop his barrage and the official now has no interest in helping him. Mike lifts up Murphy and sets him on the top rope. He looks to be setting up for a superplex.

Max: I don’t think this looks good for the Irrational Irishman.

Scott: Perhaps now he’s starting to regret bringing Mike Adams back.

Murphy fights back as he starts to lift up Mike on his shoulders. He screams “Black Out!!”

Max: Somebody stop him, he’s going to kill him!!

Mike squirm and hits a few elbows the head of Murphy. He drops back down in front of Murphy and hits a heart punch.

“He’s Unstoppable!” “He’s Unstoppable!” “He’s Unstoppable” fills the arena. Dan is gasping for breath when Mike lifts him up…

Scott: No…no way…

Max: I’m afraid so, Scott.

Scott: He can’t be thinking…

Max: He is!!

Scott and Max look up just in time to step back from the human projectile that is Murphy hurling towards their broadcast table. Smash!! Murphy’s body crashes and obliterates the wooden table on it’s way down to the unforgiving floor below.

The arena is stunned as Mike hops down from the top rope following an absolutely brutal top rope Unstoppabomb to the outside. The crowd doesn’t know what to do when Mike looks the referee dead in the eye then points to Dan.

“Count… The… Bitch… Out!!”

One…

Two…

Three…

Four…

Five…

Six…

Seven…

Eight…

Nine…

Ten…!! “Yeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhh!!!!!!” The crowd erupts at the end of the count, nearly drowning out the sound of the bell signaling the end of the match.

Max: What an incredible comeback by Mike Adams here tonight.

Scott: I don’t think anyone knew what to expect from him, but that was a man on a mission and he was not going to be stopped.

Max: And this crowd is proof that if you disappear long enough, even the most vile of men can be forgiven and embraced.

Scott: Maybe that’s a lesson for Murphy to take to heart.

Max: If he ever wakes up I think he might need a lesson in chewing and swallowing his food first.

Scott: What a match, folks and we are just getting started here at Redemption!!

Max: Now let's head down to Billy Flamer with a report on last nights Dark Match.

We switch to Billy Flamer
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Billy Flamer: The battle royal was a short one. Nothing too special as John Ster found himself throwing everyone out within six minutes. No one seemed to be trying which gave Ster a easy path to victory. It started with former EWE champion T-Dog, surprisingly he went out first. Phil Bennett gave Ster a small fight but could never get control over him. Ster one by one threw the rest out and was declared the winner. He celebrated after the match and you can see the excitement on his face, knowing his now as a Ironman title match in his future!


- - - - -

The camera switches to The One entering the arena and sees JMC.


JMC: So are you ready for it all to come to an end?

The One: You know what they say, one man's end, is anothers beginning.

JMC: I'm going to miss you, you know that.

The One: As I you. So where's Sophie?

JMC: I don't know, I think shes already here.


We switch back to the arena.



Jacob Senn vs. Beno
EWE Ironman Championship Match


Scott: This next match looks to a good one, Max. Anarchy Leader Beno takes on stable mate Jacob Senn in a contest for the newly brought back Ironman Championship.

Max: They brought that thing back? Why? Didn’t it pretty much consist of John Ster winning it like 100 times and a bunch of nobodies holding it for a week?

Scott: No Max, the Ironman Championship represents determination and the will to be Champion no matter the odds. I mean who else has to defend their title every week? With that said, Jacob and Beno are the two perfect men to be fighting for this title, both have tremendous spirit, and if the promos this week were any indication, there damn competitive aswell.

Max: Pft, I bet they wont even fight each other. I bet a finger poke of doom is on it’s way.

Scott: We’ll see any moment here, as we take the action to Mina in the ring.

Mina: The following contest is for the Ironman Championship!! Introducing together, representing ANARCHY – The Savior Jacob Senn and Beno!!!

Out come Jacob Senn and Beno together, they nod at each other and approach the ring almost as a tag team.

Scott: Well this has to be a first; both competitors are coming out together.

Max: Told you, Senn is going to sit down for “big brother” Beno.

Scott: I hope not Max. This is Redemption dammit!

Both men enter the ring, and walk up opposing turnbuckles and pose. The fans boo loudly. They walk up to each other and shake hands in the middle of the ring.

Scott: Sportsmanship is great to see, but I hope it’s all it is.

DING DING

Max: Here we go!

Both men circle each other and then grapple, Beno gets Jacob in a headlock but Jacob pushes him off and puts him in headlock of his own. Jacob whips Beno down to the ground and wrenches his neck. Beno uses his strength and slips out. He claps and says good job. Beno and Jacob Senn tie up again, Senn gets behind Beno and gives him a classic wrestling slam and gets Beno back on the mat. He flips Beno over and goes for the pin.

1..

Beno pushes Senn off and gets to his feet. Beno shakes it off and tries to refocus.

Scott: Looks like it was more a great show of sportsmanship and unity than a set up. Great to see in this day and age.

Max: Looks like Anarchy will survive the night, even though that tag match didn’t go to well.

Beno lock back up with Jacob, and tosses him into the turnbuckle. He goes to grapple but Jacob turns him around and delivers a wonderful hip toss. Beno gets up again even more frustrated, as soon as he gets up Senn hits him with another hip toss.

Scott: Jacob Senn dominating right now, let’s see how long this sportsmanship lasts before Beno starts making this more brutal.

Max: What do you mean?

Scott: Look at the promos this week Max, everything started out like they were going to fight for Anarchy, but near the end of the promos you could tell both men want this title and they think the other is underestimating the other. You can just see that Jacob Senn didn’t like being called the little brother to the leader of Anarchy.

Max: And that must be why Beno looks so frustrated, he’s embarrassed.

Beno slams his fists on the mat, gets up and throws a right hand right to Jacobs head. Then another, then another, and spears him to the ground and delivers vicious blow after blow. Beno picks up Jacob, and then delivers a devious DDT right to the mat.

Scott: There goes sportsmanship. Now Beno is in kill mode, and Senn might be in trouble.

Beno picks up Senn, but Senn gets him in a quick roll up.

Max: He’s holding the tights!

1…..

2……

NO!

Beno breaks it. Both men get to their feet but Senn hits a quick dropkick. He runs to the turnbuckle and taunts the crowd.

Scott: It’s time for the redemption Revelation!

Jacob flies off of the turnbuckle but Beno gets up and catches him and hits a powerslam!! Beno hooks his leg.

Max: This is it.

1…..

2…

Jacob kicks out. Beno goes to pick up Senn put hits him with some strong shots to the sternum. Beno falls back, Senn gets to his feet and hits a desperation Big Boot, sending Beno down. Senn then hits a standing shooting star press!

Scott: Amazing moves from Senn. He really is turning into a bright young star in EWE.

Senn goes for the pin.

1….

Beno tosses him off.

Max: Beno is a fighter, a big dumb fighter.

Scott: Hey, Beno has come along way too. But I have to say, I really thought Beno was going to dominate this match.

Beno gets up to his feet, waits a moment, and then hits him with a clothesline. Senn gets up and is hit with another clothesline. Beno says "It’s over!", gets him in the powerbomb position and hits the Beno Bomb!

Scott: Soon as we say it, Beno takes over, and this one is over.

1…..

2……

3!

NO!

Scott: Senn just kicked out of the Beno bomb!!!!

Max: This is turning into a fantastic match!

Beno gets up furious looking at the referee in anger. Senn crawls to corner, and uses the ropes to pull himself up. Beno grins, and gets ready to hit his other finisher the hit n run.

Scott: Oh this isn’t good, but Senn just wont give up. Even though he might be over matched in this match.

Max: I don’t think it’s about winning, I think it’s about earning respect now. Beno is not the king of Anarchy, and I think he’s showing it now.

Beno goes for the giant spear, but Senn moves out of the way! Beno’s shoulder hits right on the ring post. Senn slowly gets up, and lifts the hurt Beno up to a seated place on the turnbuckle.

Scott: Oh this is dangerous. Especially after we have one huge injury to Scorch tonight. We need to be safe out there.

Senn climbs up and jumps up and hits the hurricanrana!.

NO! Beno grabs him and hits a Beno Bomb awkwardly from the top rope. Jacob's arm hits the ring ropes and it whips back. He screams in pain. Beno pins him.

Scott: Oh my god, Beno bomb from the top rope!

Max: He’s dead.

1….


2……

3!

Scott: Beno wins!!!

The ref goes to raise Beno’s hand.

Max: What a good try by Senn but the leader of Anarchy…

Scott: Wait a second Max.

The ref looks down at Senn and his arm is hanging outside the ropes, making the pin a rope break. The referee waves off the finish and says the match has to continue. Beno grabs the ref and demands him to give him the title.

Scott: This match is still going!!!!

Max: Just move him to the middle Beno and win, stop fighting the ref about it.

Beno looks back at Senn, picks him up and raises three fingers signifying the third Beno bomb.

Scott: This isn’t necessary just pin him!

Max: He’s making a statement!

Beno positions Jacob, but Senn pushes off and hits a desperation superkick!!!!

Scott: Senn just hit his finisher!!

Senn pins him quick as possible.

1…..

2…..

3!

MINA: YOUR WINNER AND THE NEW EWE IRONMAN CHAMPION… THE SAVOIR JACOB SENN!!!!!!!!!

Scott: WHAT AN UPSET!!!

Max: I can’t believe it, Senn came out of nowhere and stole a match he was getting dominated in.

Scott: He did it, and he just shook up Anarchy.

Beno slowly gets up and gets face to face with the new champ.

Scott: You can feel the tension.

Beno grabs Senn’s arm that’s holding the title.

Max: this isn’t good.

Beno smiles and then raises Senn’s hand.

Scott: Max, I think Anarchy might be stronger than ever before.

Max: You might be right.

The camera switches backstage to Scorch's locker room. Scorch has a towel over his head, his chin on his chest and a large ice pad on his ankle.

Dr. Xavier: Scorch, it seems you have torn ligament in your ankle, plus bruising and a severe sprain. I'm sorry but I cannot clear you to wrestle here tonight.

Scorch looks up at him.

Scorch: Leave my room, now.

The doctor get's up.

Scorch: You to.

He points at the camera man, and the camera man and doctor leave the room. Outside of his room you can hear glass breaking and things getting thrown against the wall.

Scott: It's a dark time right now for the number 1 contender.

Max: What happens now?

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PART 2 - TOMORROW!!!

Writers
Tag Team Match - Omgajawa
Murphy vs. Adams - Scorch
Ironman Championship - APostingGod

Now it's your chance to talk about the show, and make predictions on what happens next.

Mike Adams
12-04-2011, 05:08 AM
the tag match and the ironman championship were good matches, i like the show of unity by anarchy, nice storyline touch and even though there was a false finish the sportsmanship

but no offense, my match was a piece of dogshit, i understand dan was going through a lot of issues so it was a lopsided match, but really? that was just the worst piece of shit i've ever read, it seems like no one even read any of the promos to see what the storyline was, and for some reason there were pinfall attemtps

i really hope the rest of the show is better and judging by the card it should be

Scorch
12-04-2011, 05:47 AM
I completely blanked on it being a Last Man Standing match when writing it. Work has been a bit hectic of late, heck when Ryan said we had 24 hours and 12 minutes my brain told me it was 36 hours. So that's why the pins came in as once I had the time to write, I was recalling the grudge match portion, but not that stipulation. It's a big part of why you don't here the match talked up as a Last Man Standing by Chet, Max or Scott in the actual intros or content. It's a bit embarassing in retrospect seeing as the freaking rp thread is titled Last Man Standing, but I flat out read right over it as though it was just Dan saying he'd be the last guy left in the ring, instead of the literal meaning.

I entirely disagree on it being a terrible match. As a Last Man Standing match, yeah, it's awful because I missed that part while I wrote. But judging it for what it was, you got a nice grudge match. Going through the spots, there is a mix of power by Dan and speed by Mike, as reflected by the move sets and styles. It was a little tough as Mike's moveset is more suited for a fed full of smaller guys, but he has enough to make things work. Your rps made a few things abundantly clear. Mike thinks little of Dan Murph. Mike puts family first. Dan hates Mike because he feels he mistreated and disrespects him. Dan had taken things too far with the attacks on Mike and his loved ones, and the threat against Mike's son was the tipping point.

If I had any time today I would have tweaked those sections of the match where there were pin attempts, but work and some car troubles meant I did not have the time to fix it. So things went from a Last Man Standing to a straight up grudge match.

So yes, your rps were read, and it was the effort rather than the execution that cinched the match in Mike's favor. Meaning if they had been even in amount, it's possible you would have lost. Quality does edge quantity, but effort does get recognized and rewarded.

The important notes I wanted to hit where to show the heat Dan has garnered for himself. Show the respect Mike would have gained for his work over the years. Make sure the fans get their cathartic moment to cap the feud. I think those points were addressed, albeit without the intended stipulation.

If the issue is with it not being the advertised style of match, I get that. But to say the match itself is bad as a match, I cannot agree with it. If you think the points of the rps are missed, I would say that perhaps the points were not as clear as you thought. (It's happened to me before.)

Mike Adams
12-04-2011, 05:56 AM
well i understand work and car issues can pile up and all that, but i am still not a fan of the match at all, so i'll have to respectfully disagree, i mean i did a whole rp where jess was talking about she wouldn't be sitting at ringside, and yet there she is...so you can understand why i felt the effort i put in wasn't even recognized

Scorch
12-04-2011, 05:59 AM
Can you be more detailed in what in particular you did not like about the match itself? Any criticism will be beneficial in crafting more enjoyable matches in the future. Right now all I have to go on is "missing the stip makes a match look worse than it should".

And as for predictions for Part II, I'm going to say we find out who "attacked" Scorch. And I'll say it gets even more heat on him as a result.

APostingGod
12-04-2011, 06:01 AM
Mike, we do stuff different here. Please be constructive with your opinions. Express what should be fixed, and where there were missteps. Were always trying to get better, and be constructive is better than berating.

APostingGod
12-04-2011, 06:05 AM
And congratulations to Jacob Senn! First title reign for the young man.

Mike Adams
12-04-2011, 06:10 AM
you responded before i edited, but the fact that there are pin attempts obviously bother me, jess is ringside when she said she was going to be and there wasn't a mention of Sean at all since that was basically the focal point of me agreeing to the match in the first place, it's extremely short and quite honestly makes dan look like a jobber and i understand that is due to time constraints, but for a "grudge match" this match probably would have lasted 5 minutes or so, and and for someone who wanted to end thing on his own term mike barely made dan suffer at all, also the style is very awkward and the moves being said in the commentary is kinda off-putting, but that's more of a tone thing

Scorch
12-04-2011, 06:49 AM
Agreed that specifically name dropping Sean would have added to the match. The fact Dan went after Mike's family was addressed, but in retrospect it was too vague.

With Jess appearing I debated but ultimately went with the "if they bring it up, it'll happen" rule of wrestling. When people are "banned from ringside" they tend to show at ringside. When people aren't going to be there, they tend to show up. She strikes me as the type to help protect her family in a proactive role such as the one she took.

With the commentary, I tried something a little new, it may have missed.

As for the length, that's something where I think the EWE style and PCW style you were used to differ. In EWE every moment is not always written out. Instead of a long paragraph to explain one arm drag and the guy getting up, you might get a chain of moves in a sentence or two. The intended length of this match is around 18 minutes. I do understand that when not used to the style it can effect how you read the matches. Things were not rapid fire, but more methodical in nature. I've seen 30 minute matches with less big note worthy moves, so what occurred here could certainly fit into an 18 minute match with out too much stalling. The final sequence alone would have easily taken 4-6 minutes to pull off.

As for ending on his own terms, that is what the whole stopping the official part was about. Could have been even more effective had I not missed the stipulation.

I can see where things were missed on my end. I think a few things are the result of it being a different style, but I certainly understand that wasn't the only reason, there were missteps in my writing.

Mike Adams
12-04-2011, 07:04 AM
Well then apologies, was not aware of the new style, guess I just haven't noticed in the skimming of the couple EWE shows I've read. Didn't mean to bring all the negativity into the thread, just stuck here at work and was all jazzed up to read and was just disappointed I guess. Apologies Scorch, and I did like the finish even though it was kinda sudden.

That being said, the other matches were good reads, and I look forward to seeing who is responsible for attacking Scorch, and Jesse's announcement about the lucha show was great.

legendaryken
12-04-2011, 09:53 AM
weighing in at too big and too beautiful, the team of Connie and Tina- the Bees!



Nice turn of phrase!


Teatly probably had that one coming when he questioned their popularity in their “other” careers.

Max: You mean their work with John Ster’s campaign?

Scott: Not exactly, Max.



Great gag!

Jesse's bit - good promo for SOTB.


Mina: And his opponent…from N…rk Ci…, Wei…ng i…t…2...bs..., Unst…Mi…ms!!


Strangely, the only crowd chant that interferes like that is 'You suck' - try it! I did!

Dark match - dark. Very dark. But yay! I won! Twice in one segment of one night!

btw.....just realised that I haven't sent you Ster's in-ring seg yet - wrote it a couple of weeks ago! I'll put it in the match thread.

Beno match very good also plus other segs interesting but no-one thinks that Scorch is not gonna be in that ring at the end of the night............or are you gonna go with the storyline ending????? Go on. Do it! Do it! Do it!

btw - I'm liking the split in posting the matches. I've been able to read more thoroughly than usual. You'll need to avoid delays to keep the momentum though.

Jacob Senn
12-04-2011, 03:49 PM
The reign of the Saviour begins now!

blade13
12-04-2011, 07:05 PM
Senn, great job man. It seemed to be really close between you and Beno. I was more for Beno than you because I thought he had a small edge but clearly the writer thought differentl. For the first part of the PPV, it is pretty awesome. The tag team match was a fun read and so was BenovsSenn. Sorry if the dark match is pretty lame.You can't do much with a battle royal if not everyone RPs. Congratz on the winners so far, can't wait for part 2.

Gunnar Brian
12-05-2011, 02:21 PM
Gratz Senn, but you'll have one heck of a challenge to keep that title especially looking at the new number one contender.

Anyhow, overall I have to honestly say I feel a little disappointed with the way the split has panned out. The quality of the matches is pretty much there, the segs work well (could do with a proof read/spellcheck on certain ones) as I am definatly stoked to see the Main Event and how everything around that pans out, but I did kind of expect a little more back story to act as a kind of introduction the matches, give everyone a chnce to maybe even catch up on stories they skipped.

Good start overall, maybe even great, but I'm not sure the split up works if its justified by longer/more segments

voltage231
12-06-2011, 02:55 AM
Congrats goes out to you Senn. You did one hell of a job. Let yout reign bring you prosperity. Will review the whole when Redemption is fully up

APostingGod
12-06-2011, 05:22 AM
Good start overall, maybe even great, but I'm not sure the split up works if its justified by longer/more segments

What do you mean? Would you like more or less segments? I'm trying to give each part enough oomph to work on it's own, but always lead to an conclusion. So any opinion would be great, I'm obviously saying longer segments for part 3, but maybe doing a little rearranging to make Part 2 have a big segment might work too.

Gunnar Brian
12-06-2011, 10:12 AM
What do you mean? Would you like more or less segments? I'm trying to give each part enough oomph to work on it's own, but always lead to an conclusion. So any opinion would be great, I'm obviously saying longer segments for part 3, but maybe doing a little rearranging to make Part 2 have a big segment might work too.

Nah the segs are fine IF it was together in one show. The fact the show is split into three parts, I just expected a little more emphasis on the 'How they got there' rather than the present and the result. I mean I can appriciate some matches were sout together quite close to the show itself, but in alot of cases (especially the latter matches like the EWE title and One/Jermaine) theres been a fair bit of build up and a recap of that before the matches is something that I thought we would see put in combined with the commentaries opinion of certain parts. Taking the Anarchy involved matches, it would have been nice to see something along the lines of Max/Scott, Billy/whoever having an allotted space at the start to have a run down of the story and how the matches came to be, just to give it a little more emphasis and such

APostingGod
12-06-2011, 05:49 PM
Yeah that's a very good point. I'll add something like that in Part 2, see how it reads.

APostingGod
12-07-2011, 02:57 AM
two writers doing the same match, can't get one of them lol

Elijah Edwards
12-07-2011, 08:45 PM
Tag Contender: Decent match. Nothing that really stood out, but I did enjoy the humor thrown in here and there

Jesse Segment: hypes the Lucha event coming up and I’m pretty interested to see how that turns out.

Murphy/Adams: A solid match that I felt ran a bit too short, but it was still a very good read.

Senn/Beno: really good match. Congratulations to the Jacob Senn. It was a really good rp battle and the outcome and the match written reflects that.