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The Judge
07-16-2007, 02:59 AM
WPW Sunday Night Live!
July 15th, 2007
Paradise Interprises
Greenwood, Florida


The Main Man vs. Beno


Tonight’s show is brought to you by Wickedpedia, the highly inaccurate online information resource and by Trojan condoms, fresh from their highly successful involvement in the Mike Adams stag party. First match tonight sees the return of Michael Maddox, the Main Man against the man who cannot win – Beno. Well, guess what, sportsmen everywhere – Beno won. Yes, that’s right. Hell has frozen over, Elvis has been found very much alive and Rosie O’Donnell is looking quite attractive these days. I’ll repeat that scoreline. Beno won. The Beno Bomb connected for once and the Main Man was rendered speechless, his shoulders being held to the mat for a count of 12. Yes, 12. I think referee Todd Franklin was as stunned as the rest of us.



Winner: Beno in 5.12



Forsaken vs. Sky Ryder


And after that opening stunner, comes another. Blood crazed undead creature or Marilyn Manson fan who just takes things a little too seriously – you decide. Sky Ryder, accompanied to the ring by his manager/handler/wrangler/cousin Death Ryder proceeded to give Forsaken a wrestling lesson, if by wrestling we mean blood letting on a Biblical scale. I don’t know if this match was officially declared hardcore but I can think of no other word for it, unless we count ‘polysanguinous’ The ref called a halt at 8.14 to save Forsaken from severe injury. That was about 8.10 too late.



Winner: Sky Ryder in 8.14




Blade LaVigne vs. Nick Comoroto


In a major tactically genius maneuver, Blade Lavigne turned up to the ring for this match. Nick Comoroto had no answer to this sort of onslaught and, after a dignified silence lasting 10 seconds while referee Kenny Mitchell counted Comoroto out, Lavigne was declared the winner.



Winner: Blade Lavigne in 0.10




Tank vs. Mike Corral


Tank brought his variable tag team form into this match with the Extreme Luchador, Mike Corral, recovered from last week’s nasty toe stub. Luckily for Tank, there was once again little evidence of anything extreme from Corral other than his choice of wrestling pants. Cobalt blue, our fashion correspondent, Jess Edwards tells me. Tank rolled over Corral like a Panzer division across neutral Belgium in 1939 and Corral put up much the same resistance as Belgium did. A simple Dropkick to the Knee did as much damage as anything else and Corral rolled over like a well paid whore for Tank to secure victory with a pin.



Winner: Tank in 4.42




Tina vs. Marilyn Lee Cross


This match was advertised as a Bathroom Break Women’s Match, but we here at WPW feel we cannot condone masturbation as the Surgeon General has determined that it will make you go blind, if the sight of Tina Bee hasn’t already caused this terrible affliction. So, no ‘bathroom break’ for you young lads. Instead, let me tell you about the awful treatment wreaked upon Miss Cross by the vengeful Tina and her TV star friend, Connie, recently released from the Big Brother house as irregular voting patterns were revealed. Tina body splashed Marilyn early on and the referee was knocked out by the shock wave. This allowed a run-in by Connie to deafening retching in the crowd. The reunited Bees then subjected Marilyn to a Fish Supper – that’s a Bronco Buster with extra batter – before the ref recovered, Connie exited the ring and Tina pinned Marilyn. Breathtaking. Literally.



Winner: Tina Bee in 7.50




Ben Whyndam vs. Vengeance

Unlucky in last week’s 6 man tag contest, Whyndam came to this match a possible favorite, but the reborn Vengeance proved a tough prospect and soon used his greater size to advantage with a series of clubbing blows to which Whyndam had no answer. Eschewing (that’s a great word, eschewing. I think everyone should try and use it somewhere in the course of the next week and report back on how it goes. Not you, Mike. Stick to something simpler, like……cat) his usual terrible vengeance, the wrestler seems to take pity on Whyndam and finishes it in 6.33 with a ‘Rest in Peace’



Winner: Vengeance in 6.33




Andrew Xavier vs. Jak Montoya


After an impressive debut, Montoya looked to capitalize on his good form by facing Andrew Xavier, the ex New Age Champion who is suddenly looking very old age indeed. Xavier’s mind was clearly on other things as the cocky Cuban Montoya threw him about the ring with little thought for the former champion’s reputation. The Bullet from Barcoa ended this one without Xavier landing so much as a punch.



Winner: Montoya in 7.11




Montoya celebrated in the ring for several minutes afterwards until interrupted by guest ring announcer Jess Edwards who made an eloquent plea as to the whereabouts of intended bridegroom, Mike Adams, last seen at a riotous Stag Party last night in downtown Greenwood. Commissioner Jokester was then seen making a guilty exit through the diva’s locker room. Whether he was looking guilty because he was aware of Mike Adams’ fate, or whether it was the bulge of tonight’s door receipts in his pocket, is not currently known.

This has been a WPW/legendaryken co-production. I’ve been Walter Wallcarpeting and you’ve been someone else. CU Next Tuesday for TNT!

Shadows
07-16-2007, 03:53 AM
How could I have been slaughtered? I put up two fairly good promos (plus one weak one in case i was running out of time) to his one good one. I'm not sure if they were enough to win, but to be slaughtered so bad it could have been done in four seconds? Were my promos really that bad?

The Judge
07-16-2007, 03:58 AM
No, but like I tell everyone, you gotta do them earlier. Ken PMed this edition of live to me at 4:00 PM, I didn't post till I logged on wrestlepower later. You gotta then think he didn't count anything that came in at least after 2:00 PM Pacific time.

There is no RP deadline for live, but I'd say everything you want to say sunday morning at the latest, because once you see a WPW staff member suddenly looking through live RPs and creating a thread in shows (or in a PM), it's already too late.

Looking at your post times Forsaken, Ken already finished writing live before you even posted your 2nd RP.

Shadows
07-16-2007, 05:31 AM
damn, i didn't even notice him in the thread...so all that time was wasted...

The Judge
07-16-2007, 05:33 AM
Yep, golden rule: If you want an RP to count for a show, do all your best stuff the day before, and only RP the day of if you absolutely have to.

Snowman
07-16-2007, 05:37 AM
That was an awesome read.


In a major tactically genius maneuver, Blade Lavigne turned up to the ring for this match. Nick Comoroto had no answer to this sort of onslaught.

lmao, that is brilliant.

May I say that Ken's writing style is alot similar to Terry Pratchett's. Which is a good thing in my books :D
..Pundefinately intended

Scorch
07-16-2007, 05:45 AM
Ken, this was an enjoyable edition of Sunday Night Live! While there was not much in the way of telling about what happened in the matches, it still flowed well and some parts where rather humorous. You treated the Nick vs Blade match the way it deserved to be treated. It seems like you had fun writing the show and it reflects in the content. Something to try to make it even better next time is add in more bits of move descriptions, even if you do it in a humorous manner. For instance in the Sky Ryder and Forsaken match you have it as going 8 minutes and 14 seconds, but tell nothing about any moves at all, just basically say it was a squash by Sky Ryder. You could mention a few of the moves that were done to make the show an even better read. Again, this is something you can do to enhance what was a good show.

Now with what I see Forsaken and Judge discussion, see I find this to have been a persistent issue with Ken. I understand he operates on a different time schedule then most of the rest of WPW, and I find it unfair when people have to be punished because of it. You should not be short changed of rping time, simply because a writer does not want to wait to write. The way I see it there are two solutions to this problem, neither of which require Ken to change his habits, either whenever Ken is writing a match, the participants be pmed so they are aware of any time constraints they will be facing, or Ken writes them as he does complete with a note of how close he thought the battle was, and any rps that go up before a deadline, but after he sends his match, get judged by another party, who see if those extra rps should change the end result, and if so, make the appropriate change.

Shadows
07-16-2007, 05:59 AM
though that does seem like a good idea, and it kinda sucks that i coulda lost just because of time when there was no deadline, it's also partly my fault. I decided to write a few RP's early and post them on Saturday, so i could make ryder think i wasn't gonna post. However, I ended up being away from the computer all Saturday , and on top of that something happened to the RP's i saved, cuz they weren't there when i checked today. So like i said, it sucks, and i may have gotten screwed, but it wouldn'ta happened if i woulda just posted them and hadn't gambled with my chance of winning. (note: i know the grammar is horrible here, but i'm kinda tired and don't feel like watchin my spelling and grammar.)

The Judge
07-16-2007, 06:10 AM
Well hey, you live by the sword, you die by it.

You on your wii again Kyle?

Shadows
07-16-2007, 06:32 AM
nah, just lazy and kinda tired. I'm not goin to sleep for a few hours, but i've spent most of the day trying to balance finding themes, doing chores, trying to talk to Vengeance on AIM, RPing for my match, and playing my new game. While all this is going on one of my old friends (Justin L.) called and it's kinda hard to hang up on a good friend you haven't talked to for a year. Even when they wanna talk for two hours. Not to mention I got about 4 hours of sleep last night. It was just kinda hectic and left me kinda tired, so by now i could care less about grammar, as long as it's understandable.

On the bright side, I got a whole lot of the themes done (with some slight help from vengeance) and justin may join WPW.

Prometheus
07-16-2007, 09:56 AM
I like it how we treat Ken so differently because of his schedule, marred by several big handicaps...

1-Where he lives (Center of the timezones.. geez, out of the way or what?)
2-That he has a 9 to 5 job (Beats most of us students)
3-Nap time

Mike Adams
07-16-2007, 03:59 PM
4. Plus he's like really really old

legendaryken
07-16-2007, 04:55 PM
Really old. Actually, I was on my machine checking any late RPs and posting this to Judge at about midnight my time when the bugger froze (computer, not Judge) so, when I got back online I thought i should just send it to him as it was and get him to tart it up and post it. I did actually see your RPs Forsaken, but everything was written and I didn't want to run the risk of my machine crashing again. I would still have given it to Sky but I would have given you more of the action. Sorry.
Yeah, I could add in a bit more wrestling moves but that's not my, ahem, style. I don't think Live needs too much of that anyway. Other opinions?

btw: Judge missed out the introduction, (possibly deliberately, but I wil not be censored!) which explains the Wickedpedia sponsorship. (Will we get sued for plagiarism? If so, delete again, by all means)

Greenwood is a town in Jackson County, Florida in the United States. The population was 735 at the 2000 census. As of 2004, the population recorded by the U.S. Census Bureau is 735
In the town the population was spread out with 26.4% under the age of 18, 7.2% from 18 to 24, 24.6% from 25 to 44, 25.0% from 45 to 64, and 16.7% who were 65 years of age or older. The median age was 38 years. For every 100 females there were 87.0 males. For every 100 females age 18 and over, there were 89.8 males. The median income for a household in the town was $28,750, and the median income for a family was $35,750. Males had a median income of $24,583 versus $22,083 for females. The per capita income for the town was $14,243. About 9.1% of families and 17.8% of the population were below the poverty line, including 21.6% of those under age 18 and 11.6% of those age 65 or over.

So, that means, in Greenwood, Florida, there are 36 penniless underage girls and, returning as commissioner after last week’s hugely successful Live, Jokester has let every single one of them in free! I’m your announcer Walter Wallcarpeting welcoming you to this week’s WPW Sunday Night Live!!!!!

JDK
07-16-2007, 05:29 PM
Yeah, the Blade/Como match made me genuinley LOL too. Nice to see another win for the Hitmayn, sadly Jak will not be here for the next three shows as he takes a vacation in Napoli, Italy.